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Memorable Experience
There are many experiences that we love and impress, but some experience may be important and we never forget it. For me remembrance which is about family is very important. Now I will mention New Year Day. It was my good memorable experience because it was very happy time. On New Year Day Eve, we were home and celebrated together. In evening, we cooked dinner and had it with smile and laugh. Then we grilled pork and talked together for waiting midnight as it would be New Year Day. It was very exciting. Everybody was happy and enjoyable with singing and dancing. Next time, I hurried to take a shower because I had to go temple for praying. Other persons still were there. Only me in family that went to temple with relations. When we arrived, we entered to pavilion at a temple and joined to pray with other people. I prayed for people in family happy and healthy. Importantly, I prayed for myself happy, had bright future, successful, and so on. After that, we finished and came back home. I was so happy that I started my life with god thing in beginning of year had good time with family. Although it was short time or past but I still remember that time and never forget it.
Mr. Phisit Moolwicha B.Ed.5703 ID 5780102127 No.21
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